5th July....
Early in the morning, a boy and a girl, in school uniform, were riding a bike along the street...
The girl called the boy...
"Joon!"
"Yeah"
"Do you remember what day is it today?"
"Huh? Today? hmmmmm.... I'm not sure. It's 5th of July, right?"
"Yeah but I didn't mean that."
"So what is it?"
"Ahhh forget it! Faster Joon! We're getting late."......
While sitting in the class....
"Joon! You really don't remember?"
"I really don't. Can u tell me what is it?"
"Hmmmmmmmm Never mind"
Break time....
"Joon! Are you sure you don't remember?"
"Jumi! I wonder why you keep asking about today."...
While watching tv...
"Joon! You remember now?"
While doing homework
"Joon! You really forget about it?"
While playing game
"Jooooon!"
"You know what Jumi? This is the one hundred and twenty-seventh time you ask me about it? You're not gonna tell me?"
"No, if you don't know then forget it"
Jumi looked a bit upset... Joon smiled to her childish attitude....
"Jumi! You wanna see the stars at the park tonight?"
"No I don't"
Jumi responded with disappointed voice and face. Joon still smiled and responded...
"Nahhhh... You have to come, ok? I have something to show you."
Jumi was a bit hesitant...
"You'll see if I come."
9:oo pm at the park....
Having waited for Jumi for 20 minutes, she finally came. Joon smiled and said....
"I knew you'd come."
Jumi still looked a little disappointed...
"You said you have something to show me. What is it?"
"Ahhh sit down first."
Jumi took a seat on a swing next to Joon......
"Jumi! Look! That's the star I gave you last time."
"You still remember that?! It's so bright tonight."
Joon spoke out....
"Close your eyes for a moment!"
"Why?"
"Just close them."
.........................
"Jumi! Open your eyes!"
Jumi opened her eyes and saw a big glass full of stars and glitter.....
"Happy birthday Jumi! I've collected stars from the sky for you^^"
"I thought you don't remember my birthday."
"Haha... I was just playing around with you. No matter what I will never ever forget your birthday."
"Eh! Why there's only one bright pink star in this glass surrounding by many white stars?"
"That's you. There are so many stars around you. But you are the brightest, the most beautiful and the unique one. The white stars are me who always be around and protect you."
Joon looked at Jumi and realized that she was crying....
"Jumi! Why are you crying?"
She hugged him and said...
"Thank you Joon! This is the best birthday gift I've ever received."
Joon smiled and said....
"You wanna thank me? Then please be happy forever."..............................
Jumi's house.....
"Mummy! I'm back!"
"Welcome back! Did you have fun?"
"Yeah!"
"Jumi! Come here! I have something to tell you."
Jumi walked toward her mother.....
"Jumi! I want to tell you about your illness."
Jumi's face suddenly turned upset once her mum mentioned about her illness...
"I just met the doctor. He told me that your illness is getting serious. You have to get surgery done at the state. So I'm planning to take you there next week."
Her mum told her with face full of depression....
Jumi was very shocked...
"Next week? Mum! Why it's so sudden? You should have told me earlier. So it means I have to leave everyone forever?"
"No Jumi! Listen to mum! As your surgery succeeds, we'll be back."
"What if it's not going to succeed? What if i'll never come back? Does that mean I don't even have a little last chance to be with everyone?"
"Jumi! It's not like that. Trust me! It will succeed. You're going to live with us forever."
Jumi and her mum started to cry....
"I'm sorry, Mum! I can't do this.".....
Jumi cried and ran out of her house while the raindrops are falling really hardly...........
"Jumi! Jumi!................."..............................
To be continued
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In the paragraph: When playing game
ReplyDelete"Jumi! You wanna see the stars at the park tonight?"
"Tonight? ok!"........
- I think she should answer "No" at first and after Joon begged her then she agreed to go cuz she was angry with Joon who didn't remember her birthday's date.
In the paragraph: Jumi's house
- I think that her mother should say sth else before she told Jumi about her illness. I mean the introduction then her illness.
I know this time is ur vocation, but next year u r grade 12 so u need to study some subjects in advance. Don't spend too much time on ur novel cuz u need to get good grade. I heard that there are 3 groups for grade 12 now. Which one did u choose??? Heh can I ask sth??? Which school and skill do u want to study after grade 12???
I chose the highest one. I haven't decided on the school and skill yet. Looks like I have no idea about these...
ReplyDeleteWait... what's her illness? how come i dont notice in in the last 4 episodes?
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